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  • Anna Downes

    All The Stars Are Gone by Anna Downes 

    When aspiring actress Emily finds herself auditioning for the role of a piece of cheese, she realises how much her life sucks. She’s jobless, penniless, essentially homeless and a massive disappointment to her adoptive parents. Oh, and she’s a magnet for sexual harassment. In short, things couldn’t get worse.

    Enter Scott Denny, a multi-millionaire who seems to offer all the answers to Emily’s problems. But Scott has his own problems, much darker and more terrible than Emily can imagine.

    When Emily accepts a job working at Scott’s remote estate in France, she finds herself living at close quarters with Scott, his wife and their six-year-old daughter. As her relationship with each family member grows and her feelings towards them become more complicated, Emily falls down a rabbit-hole of wealth and extravagance and cuts ties with her former life. But soon she has questions. Why do the Dennys live such an isolated life? What is the mysterious illness from which Scott’s daughter is suffering? And what has Scott done that makes him drink and cry and harm himself?

    Emily is about to uncover a devastating secret and soon she must make a choice. Will she destroy her own happiness to protect the people she has come to love?

    ALL THE STARS ARE GONE is Liane Moriarty meets THE LIGHT BETWEEN OCEANS. A literary/commercial fiction novel of 85,000 words, the story is based on my experiences working as a housekeeper on a French estate in 2009 and 2010.

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    Vote for your favorite pitch. The pitch that receives the most votes will be named Fan Favorite, and the author will receive a free one-hour consult with us (worth $250).

    Listen to our feedback on All The Stars Are Gone. 

  • Heather Ryder

    The Cyber Trials by Heather Ryder

    “Give a man a mask, and he will show you his true self” – Oscar Wilde

    It’s been two months since Alicia Farrell’s body was found dumped in the woods and Elaine Thompson isn’t sure the town of Patriot, Indiana will ever recover. Grief has given in to anger as the FBI task force tracking the Midwest Strangler remains empty handed and the case grows cold. Then Elaine gets a call from her best friend’s lawyer. Tristan has just become the primary suspect in the investigation and Elaine is his only alibi.

    Except none of that makes sense. Tristan lives in Texas, and he and Elaine have never physically met.

    Brought together in their early teens by a love of online video games, Elaine and Tristan have spent the last fifteen years sharing their lives virtually. Now, they have to convince the world of their friendship or Elaine’s testimony won’t hold weight. But as the trial unfolds and the evidence against him starts to stack up, Elaine begins to question everything she thought she knew.

    Caught between an overzealous prosecution desperate for a conviction, a town out for blood, and her loyalty to Tristan, Elaine struggles to separate fact from fiction. The State says she was either willingly blind or naïve, but Elaine’s can’t believe the story is that black and white. To reach the truth, she must dig into painful memories she had long since hidden away, but what she finds may shatter their friendship forever.

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    Vote for your favorite pitch. The pitch that receives the most votes will be named Fan Favorite, and the author will receive a free one-hour consult with us (worth $250).

    Listen to our feedback on The Cyber Trials.

  • Daniel T. Moore

    Godsblood: Book one of the Shatter Spire Symphony by Daniel T. Moore

    The gods are dead. Change is coming on wings, heralded by three women:

    The girl of fire and sunshine will become the ache in the heart of the world; will weep a trail of tears which burst into blooms of flame for a sister that could not be saved; will hunt through the streets of a shadowed city for a father and a brother, to save one and kill the other; will stand on a grave marked with no stone and look out on a world of her own making. But she is young yet.

    The surgeon of Artisan’s Alley, whose criminal enterprise is built for the triumph of the poor over the tyranny of the rich; who breaks the knees of nobles unable to meet the terms of their loans, and turns over the profits to the sick and the poor; who, for love, will find herself elsewhere entirely.

    The gunslinger is the restless daughter of a man murdered by his best friend. A woman out of love with her life, out of love with her man, and on a collision course with those who put her father in an early grave.

    GODSBLOOD is a 140 000+ word PG-13 story that won’t stand still.  It’s an epic sci-fantasy about three young black women ages nine, twenty-seven and thirty-four.

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    Vote for your favorite pitch. The pitch that receives the most votes will be named Fan Favorite, and the author will receive a free one-hour consult with us (worth $250).

    Listen to our feedback on Godsblood.

  • NaNoWriMo Pitchapalooza 2017

    NaNoWriMo Pitchapalooza 2017

    Nano Nation delivered yet another batch of pulse-pounding pitches! Gravediggers and blood moons, a tomato survivalist festival, immigration and its struggles in Rhodesia and the United States: once again, we were totally blown away by the diversity, quantity and quality of pitches we got in our NaNoWriMo Pitchapalooza. But of course we’ve come to expect this level of excellence from NaNo Nation. The Book Doctors had an absolute blast swimming in this vast pool of pitches.

    Now for the 411: The 25 pitches were selected randomly. You can watch the recording of NaNoWriMo Pitchapalooza to hear our feedback. It’s our mission to try to help all you amazing writers not just get published, but get successfully published.  That’s why we’ve told you what works, but also what needs to be improved.

    But don’t let our opinion sway your vote. What story intrigues you? What pitch would prod you from the couch to the bookstore (or, if you’re really lazy, to buy it online)? The pitch that receives the most votes by 11:59 p.m. PST on March 15th will be awarded the Fan Favorite, and the author will receive a free one-hour consult with us (worth $250).

    But please note: YOU CAN ONLY VOTE ONCE! So please choose carefully. Don’t just read the first couple of pitches — read them all. You owe it to your fellow Wrimos. Encourage your friends, family and random strangers to vote for you via the link to the poll. We will also be posting these pitches—a couple a day–on our Facebook page. We encourage anyone to “like” your entry but only poll votes from the webpage will count towards the Fan Favorite.

    Finally, through March 15th, we are still offering a free webinar (worth $75) to anyone who buys a copy of our book The Essential Guide To Getting Your Book Published. Just email us (david@bookdoctors2.pairsite.com) a copy of your receipt and we’ll be in touch to set up a webinar.

    Write on, Wrimos!

    Read the 2017 pitches below and vote for your favorite.

    Total Voters: 1,565

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  • Deborah Henely

    Last Chance, Texas by Deborah Henely

    Last Chance, Texas has the highest literacy rate in the state and it may have been due to the unusual influence Ms. Hatty, the librarian, had over the small town. When the lovely old library burns to the ground, along with Ms. Hatty, her influence extends beyond the grave with the last nine books left in a box. Each  book was earmarked by a sticky note with the recipient’s name.

    The nine books are random, from a grimy copy of the Grinch who Stole Christmas for the town’s playboy, to Coding for Dummies for the brilliant Computer Analyst who consulted for Dell Industries. She indicated Marley and Me to go to an irascible old coot who hated dogs, and a copy of The Art of French Cooking to a cowgirl who couldn’t boil water. Persuasion, The Mayor of Casterbridge, The Complete Works of Shakespeare, Like Water for Chocolate, and John Addams were the rest of the books, all for  specific people and Ms. Hatty’s unfathomable reasons.

    The entire town starts a reading frenzy, to ascribe meaning to her wishes. Meanwhile, the true reason the library was destroyed becomes all too clear when the governor’s office announces plans for the East/West Corridor, cutting directly through Last Chance. It will erase the town, and give anyone with large adjoining acreages millions of dollars in an eminent domain deal.

    Ms. Hatty, with her Democratic Party influence and political clout, would have stood in the way of the Corridor Deal.

    She had to go.

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    Vote for your favorite pitch. The pitch that receives the most votes will be awarded the “Fan Favorite,” and the author will receive a free one-hour consult with us (worth $250).

  • Hanna Alkaf

    The Weight of Our Sky by Hanna Alkaf 

    By the time school ends on Tuesday, Melati Ahmad’s mother has died 17 times.

    On the way to school, she is run over by a runaway lorry. During English, she is caught in a crossfire and hit by a stray bullet straight through the chest. At recess, she accidentally ingests some sort of dire poison. And as they peruse their geography textbooks, Melati’s mother is stabbed repeatedly by robbers.

    Melati knows she isn’t to blame. It’s the Djinn, scratching at her mind with his wicked, clawed fingers, squeezing the air out of her lungs and pounding urgent tattoos on her heart. It’s only through an intricate web of counting and tapping that she’s able to tame the beast within her and keep her mother safe. That’s the sacrifice the Djinn demands, and one she’s happy to pay.

    But it’s 1969, and on May 13th, the already percolating melting pot that is Kuala Lumpur boils over. As the Chinese and Malays wage war against each other, Mel and her mother find themselves separated by a city in flames. And with a 24-hour curfew in place and all lines of communication down, it will take all of the courage, grit and Beatles songs in Melati’s arsenal to overcome the violence on the streets, her own prejudices, and the Djinn’s surging power to make it back to the one person she can’t risk losing.

    Based on actual events, THE WEIGHT OF OUR SKY is a young adult novel complete at about 57,000 words.

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    Vote for your favorite pitch. The pitch that receives the most votes will be awarded the “Fan Favorite,” and the author will receive a free one-hour consult with us (worth $250).

  • Elizabeth Brookbank

    The Friend by Elizabeth Brookbank

    My novel is titled The Friend and is about Pansy, the free-spirited daughter of an Irish revolutionary and a washer woman, and Livvy (short for Olivia), the prim and proper daughter of an English gentleman: two young women from very different backgrounds living in nineteenth century England who fall in love with each other. In a world that views their love as unspeakable and unnatural, Pansy and Livvy want nothing more than to be together. They are able to hide for a while  behind the thin veneer of social acceptability provided by the fashion of the time for “romantic friendships” between women. Eventually though, things start to go wrong. Livvy’s parents insist she marry the eldest son of the scheming and social-climbing Mr. John Archibald – not only to get Livvy clear of Pansy, but to shore up the family’s finances and its hold on their historic estate. Forced into a corner by Livvy’s impending nuptials and increasing suspicions about the true nature of their relationship, Pansy and Livvy decide to run away together – to elope to America to start a new life. The night they set for their escape arrives, but Livvy never makes it to the ship they planned to take to freedom. In the wake of her disappearance, Pansy is arrested and charged with her murder…

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    Vote for your favorite pitch. The pitch that receives the most votes will be awarded the “Fan Favorite,” and the author will receive a free one-hour consult with us (worth $250).

  • Leann Daniel

    The Anger Album by Leann Daniel 

    Seventeen-year-old songwriter, Andie Lund, has spent a good deal of her life engaging in face time with a variety of anger management therapists. So when it seems Andie has met her match with Dr. Jay Dickson, she makes it a personal challenge to contest everything he says or does. That is until she’s forced to join sides with the shrink or risk her entire career falling through.

    Andie’s band has a distribution deal lined up with Strange Angels Entertainment in Los Angeles, if they can write and record an entire album in a month’s time. To get her father to agree on letting her pursue this opportunity before she’s eighteen, Andie must first strike a deal with her therapist stating that she will retire her iron fists and produce an effective anger journal so she might win her freedom from the shackles of therapy. But when the root source of all her anger begins to unveil itself in the form of an unexpected classmate, Andie must try and cope with these new truths without losing her temper, her career, or (most importantly) herself.

    THE ANGER ALBUM is a 96,000-word literary young adult novel told alongside Andie’s lyrics from each song written throughout the story. It will perhaps appeal to readers of Jesse Andrews and Tara Kelly, and anyone who appreciates a taste for music and a bit of humor as well.

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  • Jaclyn Reiswig

    Second Life by Jaclyn Reiswig 

    Wes Hastings was just another of her British actor make-believe boyfriends. She never expected she’d actually meet him—on the Tube, of all places.

    She never expected their train to explode moments later.

    Her dream trip to London morphs into a nightmare. She’s injured, stranded underground in the smoking ruins of the car. Alone, except for one familiar stranger. Turns out it’s easier to see your celebrity crush as a real person when he’s bleeding to death. Bombings are great for perspective.

    He’s not Wes Hastings the actor anymore. He’s the brave man showing her how to hold it together. She has basic first aid training. He has a dark sense of humor. They have each other—but his time is running out.

    Help finally arrives in the form of a medic, who gives her a terrible choice: she can watch Wes die, or risk her life on a chance to save him.

    Even if they both survive, moving on without him may prove a more difficult challenge. They’ll be separated by an ocean, by his fame—by her integrity.

    And he never even got her name.

    SECOND LIFE is a 70,000 word contemporary romance. I earned my BA in English with a concentration in writing, and am lucky to stay home with my two kids. SECOND LIFE is my debut novel, but I am an experienced pro at crushes on British actors.

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  • N.L. Nelson

    Life is Like A Free Throw by N.L. Nelson 

    “Someone just killed my sistah!”  The year is 2004, and fear fills the back alleys and parks of Washington DC.  Night clubs close and children go in hiding.  Rumors surface that the organization Blue is behind the rebuilding of Shade.  And just when girlz finally find a good man, the road house boyz rise again.

    Banker by day, baller by night.  31 year old, Treshawn D. Brown has only one goal; to get back on the basketball court and represent the Minnesota Timberwolves.  With the help of his friends, club bouncer Derek Walker and auto mechanic Xavier Rush he may get a second chance, to fix a costly mistake that sidelined his career two years ago.

    If he can just hide his 2 year relationship with his flamboyant lover Spencer Johnson, avoid his nemesis Anthony Singletary, and reveal the cryptic messages of Men of Twilight, then certainly he can get one more shot at the pro circuit.

    LIFE IS LIKE A FREE THROW is the first novel by author N.L. Nelson.  This journey explores men who love basketball, other men, and a good back alley brawl.  Anyone who has a dream, will want to follow the exploits of Treshawn and his boyees as they try to follow their destiny, get their man, and make DC proud.

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